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Look, I wrote something Christmassy :dummy:
This is part of the art trade I was doing with :iconshinkami: for Christmas. She's drawing a picture with all of our characters in it, and I'm writing random short stories. Which is always fun :la:
Also, I wanted to include Fitch's ability to sing XDD

Uh. And, Steven's invisible. Literally. Just so you know. 

You can see all of the characters here. <-*Points conspicuously to link*
^^^ THIS IS AN AWESOME OTOME GAME AND THE LINK TO THE DEMO IS ON THE NEWEST DEVIATION SO IF YOU LIKE OTOME GAMES PLEASE GIVE IT A GO :iconexplodelaplz:

Ahem. *Realises that my comments make no sense* Hope you like it! :meow:

Characters (c) :iconshinkami: and :iconsilvery-storm:
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AKreiko Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Student General Artist
:iconmoeblushplz: Oh my goodness this was adorable and nicely written-- I didn't know Fitch could sing well...even if he was nervous. And Cath, I can imagine him. The death glare he's giving Acer while he's just there singing his heart out.

Acer please stahp your tone deafness is overwhelming--
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Silvery-Storm Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
:iconehwhatblushplz: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :heart:
Hehe yeah, he generally sings pretty softly unless he really gets into a song. But even then he can't sing the low notes XD
Cath's 'your bad singing woke me up' expression was a lot of fun to write :D 

FINALLY SOMEONE SAID IT WITHOUT TRYING TO ATTACK HIM :iconrlytearplz:
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AKreiko Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Student General Artist
...Then even if he did a duet with Acer or acted as a second voice then he wouldn't be heard...

...that is a bad suggestion. o-o''

 IT HAD TO BE SAID. :iconmanlytearsplz:
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Shinkami Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Gghhghghghhhhhhhhhhhhhh oh my goodness X'D This made me giggle so much. It's just so stinking cute, and I can't tell you how much I love that Fitch took over and saved everyone. Just wish I could hear that beautiful shota voice, man. This was wonderful to read and just eeep I can't wait to read the rest.

...orz sorry for horrible comment, I am just so sleepeh and words can't express how much I enjoy your writing anyway.

m8 :iconheplz:
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Silvery-Storm Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013
Your horrible comment is still very nice c; Plus, short stories like these are always hard to write comments to. They're more about exploring characterisation. Which is what you commented on. So, no worries mate ouo

And yes, Fitch is what I'd call a reluctant hero in this case XD

In any case, I'm glad you liked it :iconsupertighthugplz:
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Shinkami Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Student Digital Artist
What I'm really wondering is if Fitch runs the drastic scales like Mariah Carey does ouo I BET HE DOES IT EVEN BETTER. I really want to watch him doing karaoke; I can see him getting into it as the song goes on and he gets cheered on, like getting into it enough to snap his fingers and spin around and crowdsurf - //shot

BUT YES, I LOVED IT. I need to just compile a favorite folder for all the stuff done for me, don't even know how I haven't already done this.
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Silvery-Storm Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013
I'm sure he does XD I imagine Fitch's singing style to be very soft at the start of a song, because he's nervous, and if people seem to like it he'll progressively get louder and start smiling more. Snapping his fingers and spinning around could happen, I think c; And he might throw the occasional flirty glance, but only if the song was high-energy enough. Not sure about crowd-surfing though.

Aww, I'd be flattered :iconblushplz: But seriously... good luck with that. I have a feeling it isn't as easy as it seems XD
Which reminds me, I had the misfortune of going into my favourites just then. Needless to say I deleted all of my folders. I've reached the stage where I favourite art not only because I appreciate it, but for future reference so that I know what artists I have and haven't seen ._. All in the name of record-keeping.
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Shinkami Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
UGGGGHHHH that...sounds like it'd be about the cutest thing to watch/hear ever. I WANNA SEE FITCHU'S FLIRTY KARAOKE GLANCE *flips table*

Wat. Does that include like...every artist on DA you have ever seen? Like...every piece of art you've ever seen on this site? Please say no. Please say nooo XD
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Silvery-Storm Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014
It'd be like...
like...
:icondoctorwinkplz:
XD

Oh, no way mate. That would be such a waste of time and energy XD If I like a picture enough then I favourite it. Then if I come upon it again someday I at least know that I've seen it/ once liked it. ...That makes no sense ._. But anyway, it works, much like the rest of my crazy brain.
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